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Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Cultural Experience Expository Essay Guidelines


Ever since its founding in 1776, and even before then, the United States has attracted immigrants from around the world. For well over two centuries, people have flocked to this nation as opportunists, sojourners, missionaries, and refugees. Over time, millions around the world have found emigrating to the U.S. as the only alternative to starvation, death, or a life full of hardships and suffering. With thousands from nations spanning the globe, American has become a mosaic of people, culture, and hope.

Researching: Research the concerns and life experiences of one particular cultural group. There are a number of excellent immigrant life stories found on the internet that may provide insight into their experiences. Consider the following questions as you research:
  1. What were conditions like in the homeland that caused people to emigrate? (intro)
  2. What type of jobs were available to them (once they got here)? What kind of work did they do? (conclusion)
  3. What were the struggles they faced when they arrived? (conclusion)
  4. What are some cultural specific traditions of the group? (body)
    1. Holiday traditions
    2. food
    3. music/art
    4. folklore/legends
    5. religions
    6. behavior/norms
    7. values
    8. clothing

CLICK HERE for the expository essay outline.

Blog 9: Books and Knowledge


DUE TUESDAY December 4, 2012
 
It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? Make sure to use specific examples and reference detailed events, experiences, books and other material. A minimum of 2 paragraphs, as always, with at least a 2-3 sentence response to someone else's blog.


Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Paraphrasing Practice and Games


If you are unsure about plagiarism vs. paraphrase, CLICK HERE for another website full of explanations and examples. Also, please follow the links below to complete the class activities and homework worksheet. 


Paraphrasing Notes from Pros


Quoted From  Purdue Online Writing Lab

A paraphrase is...

  • your own rendition of essential information and ideas expressed by someone else, presented in a new form.
  • one legitimate way (when accompanied by accurate documentation) to borrow from a source.
  • a more detailed restatement than a summary, which focuses concisely on a single main idea.

Paraphrasing is a valuable skill because...

  • it is better than quoting information from an undistinguished passage.
  • it helps you control the temptation to quote too much.
  • the mental process required for successful paraphrasing helps you to grasp the full meaning of the original.

6 Steps to Effective Paraphrasing

  1. Reread the original passage until you understand its full meaning.
  2. Set the original aside, and write your paraphrase on a note card.
  3. Jot down a few words below your paraphrase to remind you later how you envision using this material. At the top of the note card, write a key word or phrase to indicate the subject of your paraphrase.
  4. Check your rendition with the original to make sure that your version accurately expresses all the essential information in a new form.
  5. Use quotation marks to identify any unique term or phraseology you have borrowed exactly from the source.
  6. Record the source (including the page) on your note card so that you can credit it easily if you decide to incorporate the material into your paper.

Some examples to compare

The original passage:
Students frequently overuse direct quotation in taking notes, and as a result they overuse quotations in the final [research] paper. Probably only about 10% of your final manuscript should appear as directly quoted matter. Therefore, you should strive to limit the amount of exact transcribing of source materials while taking notes. Lester, James D. Writing Research Papers. 2nd ed. (1976): 46-47.
A legitimate paraphrase:
In research papers students often quote excessively, failing to keep quoted material down to a desirable level. Since the problem usually originates during note taking, it is essential to minimize the material recorded verbatim (Lester 46-47).
An acceptable summary:
Students should take just a few notes in direct quotation from sources to help minimize the amount of quoted material in a research paper (Lester 46-47).
A plagiarized version:
Students often use too many direct quotations when they take notes, resulting in too many of them in the final research paper. In fact, probably only about 10% of the final copy should consist of directly quoted material. So it is important to limit the amount of source material copied while taking notes.

Paraphrasing PowerPoint Notes


Friday, November 16, 2012

Blog 8 - "The Machine"

DUE Tuesday, November 27, 2012
Bill Gates stated, “I think it’s fair to say that personal computers have become the most empowering tool we’ve ever created. They’re tools of communication, they’re tools of creativity, and they can be shaped by their user.” Why might one argue that a machine can be life-changing? Using examples from literature, history, science, or observation, write a 2 paragraph response about how a “machine”/”technology” can change the way of life. Make sure to be specific and detailed in your reasons and explanations.
Please read other posts before writing. A response that merely restates another blogger’s response will receive no credit. Additionally, comment on at least one other student’s response by providing additional insight or commentary on their ideas.

Sunday, November 4, 2012

Blog 7: Hurricane Tale

How did you spend the hurricane (and post-hurricane) days? (with or without power). Write at least a 2 paragraph reaction, including observations, emotions and your own experiences in the narrative.